Persuasive writing

The Paparoa Track is a 7 day walk on the Paparoa Range mountains of the West Coast.

I think the Paparoa Track is a good idea.

First it is a good idea to have a track because you can go outside
and get more exercise.

You can walk for 7 days to an hour. it is your choice.

Next I think it is a good idea because you can see the environment
like rivers swishing, the trees blowing, the animals running, the birds flying.

Lastly, I think it is a good idea because you can get a

good job by becoming a guide.

I think it is a good i dear